tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4210963596064506203.post7635924119442046518..comments2015-06-17T16:18:12.245-07:00Comments on Tempietto: SepulchreYoung Geoffrionhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05329599456097619188noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4210963596064506203.post-19643589136172287012009-04-23T08:24:00.000-07:002009-04-23T08:24:00.000-07:00I am terribly embarrassed to have recommended this...I am terribly embarrassed to have recommended this book to you.Ellen McCormick Martenshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13038378496712513630noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4210963596064506203.post-33932706696964050922009-04-19T07:24:00.000-07:002009-04-19T07:24:00.000-07:00I reccomended in via Mrs Antfarm - but it turns ou...I reccomended in via Mrs Antfarm - but it turns out I had my facts crossed and my wires wrong - she'd never read it :)<br /><br />I say read Star of The Sea - I loved it :)HBAnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4210963596064506203.post-57289413051495339042009-04-06T07:33:00.000-07:002009-04-06T07:33:00.000-07:00OK I will try again:Well and incisively reviewed ....OK I will try again:<BR/><BR/>Well and incisively reviewed ... it is plot driven, definitely. No character is fleshed out, as you say, repetitions in the wording. There was overuse of the word "judder", for example. <BR/><BR/>We never find out why she and Hal are attracted to one another, and the young girl Leonie is IDIOTIC.<BR/><BR/>Another irritant was the references to Paul Foster Case; she tells us that he linked colors, musical notes and the Tarot; then she misquotes his work. For my taste, if one is planning to refer to something that is historicallly true, it should be rendered faithfully. The rest, the fictions, can be as wild as the author desires.<BR/><BR/>It is engaging nonetheless, but leaves the reader craving better stuff. Now it is up to you to provide what we so desperately need: mysterious historical fiction that is good writing!Enjah Mysteriohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16875158600361401915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4210963596064506203.post-45973391934951830662009-04-06T07:30:00.000-07:002009-04-06T07:30:00.000-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Enjah Mysteriohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16875158600361401915noreply@blogger.com